under the clear sky
fishes splashing in the lake
life is a struggle ~
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Such an exquisite twin haiku! Masterfully written, Dr Nehal!
Unavoidable truths poetically and beautifully said. Lovely work!
Dear Asim ji, so good to see your twin haiku - first thing after i open this site - the canvas of life painted with beautiful and meaningful words. Top score and so happy to see you back Asim ji
every part of nature is struggling to survive well; nice crafted the theme of struggle in life
Two scenes merged perfectly. Twin feast of haikus.
Yes, patches of clouds are in different clusters... small, huge, in different shapes and sizes. Loved the inherent beauty of this magnificent little poem.