Haiku & Senryu Comments
boots upon a shelf
after long tiring journey
the warmth in the bed.
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Exquisite. The two themes seemingly un-related, converge in the sublime ending. Lovely
Always a pleasure to read your poems dear Asim ji
Nothing to compare with the warmth of the bed and the leaves that manure the mother earth.
Wonderful poems both haiku & senryu - a beautiful combination and meaningful content.
Sublime finish: the warmth in the bed. and manure for the earth. Too Good.
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7/19/2025 6:09:37 PM # 1.0.0
We all need to regenerate!