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Haiku Seldom Rhyme an Accepted Paradigm Comments

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Haiku seldom rhyme
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Jim McGill
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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You rule your own poem. And from your own rules you roam.You feel right at home.

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Jim McGill 03 October 2024

Thank you for your comments. I realize that I am a bit late in replying, as it it is now October. However, I have been suffering a serious "Writers Block". I seem to have it in under control at the moment. Thank you for your comments. The rhymes, …home, …roam, …poem are much appreciated.

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You feel right at home

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

And from your own rules you roam

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You rule your own poem

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D.N. Rebb 14 January 2024

Hey, rules are made ro be broken. I enjoyed these rhyming haikus. There's probably a name for them somewhere already though.

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Jim McGill 03 October 2024

Sorry Rebb. It is now October and I just noticed your comments. I have had a bout of "writers block" that i had trouble getting out of. Fortunately, last month I was able to beat it…for the time being anyway. I thank you for your for your comments.

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