Haiku. Seaweeds (5-7-5) Comments

A lovely haiku, but isn't the last line comprised of 6 syllables? (qui-ver-ing)

When the picture or the sight/scene comes alive as you read the lines, that is how a poem's beauty defines... Lovely Haiku.

A good haiku in which you have beautifully captured a sight normally most overlook.

surfers can't stand it smells like fish, don't taste like it please float away soon ; -)

Beautiful Haiku. I can see the seaweeds dancing in the churning waters.

Sea weeds swirl quivering....such an amazing haiku that amazes mind entirely. Very tiny poem but speaks about many hings. Very wisely shared really. Churning funnel face this amazes mind....10

Very short, Wounder of nature..............

So nicely envisioned the life force of seaweeds. Fantastic depiction.....10

After reading your three beautiful lines, I am beginning to like Haiku-10

natures wonder in three lines

Beautiful imagery you have captured the life force of seaweeds!

Picture of swirling seaweeds is infront on my eyes.. lovely.