a summer shower
raindrops cover barren land
star's constellation
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You`ve written a good haiku. We have all its parts: the what, the when, and the conclusion with its five, seven, and five syllables in that order. This is a wonderful example on how a real haiku should be carried out. Good read
Magnificent haku, Mr. Asim Sir! Refreshened in such a summer shower over barren land, very imaginable, Cutest brevity.
Like the tears of the Gods Bravo!