Tuesday, June 15, 2021

Haiku ~ Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

a summer shower
raindrops cover barren land
star's constellation
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 June 2021

Like the tears of the Gods Bravo!

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Beautiful and brilliant full of stars, dear Asim ji

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KAVIN CHARALAN 16 June 2021

nice

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Varsha M 16 June 2021

Indeed beautiful one

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Varsha M 16 June 2021

Luis admired then know its time to sail on cloud nine

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Anjandev Roy 16 June 2021

Wonderful

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Luis A. Estable 16 June 2021

You`ve written a good haiku. We have all its parts: the what, the when, and the conclusion with its five, seven, and five syllables in that order. This is a wonderful example on how a real haiku should be carried out. Good read

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 June 2021

I agree with Kostas it is BRILLIANT! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 16 June 2021

Brilliant haiku!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

Magnificent haku, Mr. Asim Sir! Refreshened in such a summer shower over barren land, very imaginable, Cutest brevity.

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