Monday, January 25, 2021

Haiku- Rose And Bee Comments

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first rose has opened
fragrance of petals invites
bee to come and dine
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 02 July 2021

For the merry of Mind and pury of kind. How i long to live and dine with you rose mine... beautiful one sirji.

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Poetic Sky 26 January 2021

If it is honey bee we will enjoy honey.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 January 2021

Every rose petal carefully nourishes the bee. There is deep relationship of bee with rose. This poem is excellently penned.

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Anjandev Roy 26 January 2021

Excellent write......as usual....

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Sharad Bhatia 26 January 2021

The scent of roses is so beautiful that we all go to the rose। Thank you for sharing such a magnificent poem

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Rini Shibu 25 January 2021

Lovely poem..impressive

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Gordon Walter 25 January 2021

Nice Haiku.

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

bee to come and dine - Glory and achievement.

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

fragrance of petals invites - A new beginning

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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

first rose has opened - Patience and wait over

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 25 January 2021

Sweet and yummy. Nice haiku.

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M. Asim Nehal

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