Sunday, February 6, 2022

Haiku ~ Red Berries Comments

Rating: 5.0

peeps under the bush
between the green winter leaves
smiling red berries
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M. Asim Nehal
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David Wood 08 February 2022

Perhaps red berries from winter holly. Lovely Haiku.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

My two most favourite colours on this earth, so visibly watched here 5 Stars***** I have enjoyed tremendously, Dr. Asim

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Sandra Feldman 08 February 2022

Very nice! So cleverly conceived. Put a smile on my face, too. Thank you, dear poet.

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Anjandev Roy 07 February 2022

Brilliant....once again....thank u..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 February 2022

Excellent Doc Just beautiful Bravo!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 February 2022

Loved the smiling red berries.....dear Asim ji..10

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 07 February 2022

Beaitiful short description, a nice haiku.

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Poetic Sky 06 February 2022

Beautiful imagery, red berries smiling through the green leaves.

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