Haiku - Raining In And Out Comments

a poet of feelings....a fine metaphor.....good.

love at its best form

In the four stanzas of the above Haiku, a traditional form of Japanese poetry, with the 1st.,2nd. and 4th.lines of each stanza, hardly having any rhyme scheme and comprising 5,7and 5 syllables respectively, poetess, Sanjukta Nag, has been able to make love reign anyway in any mood of either melancholia or mirthfulness in us. The concise creation is aesthetically a potential rendition, indeed,

Love reigns in these beautiful Haiku.....

lovely haiku written with love. thanks-10

The rain has intensified the longing for a loved one! Though there is gloom gathering in the heart about the love that couldn't blossom, love continues to burn inside, making life hopeful! Beautiful string of Senryu! You have such discipline over your words!

Beautiful love to read again and again

This is a wonderful poem....Hope and love....they remain eternal. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely poem. Simple and beautiful. Keep it up, dear poet.

It feels wet inside Inner clouds showering gloom As your love did not bloom- - - -Beautiful rendition.

Hopes are shivering Heart is too fragile to mend Still love never ends. it is the insatiable desire to love and to be loved which keeps us going on in life and through life. no one can live without love. thank you for your poetic expressions.

Lovely poem, I could imagine the person standing by the window. I also loved your haikus.

There is still a hope that someday you will get the love. Full of hope the poem flows with a nice style.

I can see a lover sitting by a window deep in though about their past lover. Good poem

Still thinking of you; with the muse of love and life. Nice work.

Never ending story of love..............threaded with silken words...........Loved it....10+++++

It feels wet inside Inner clouds showering gloom As your love didn’t bloom......deep speculation, deep love. Marvellous depiction with diction. Thank to you dear Sanjukta I like your poem posting. .....10