Haiku- Rainbow Comments
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Lovely imagery. A rainbow is truly a magical thing. Its colors are soothing. A beautiful haiku with good rhythm.10
Thank you Nosheen....! It's long since I have experimented with the haiku form. Glad you liked it!
Beautiful haiku on rainbow nicely presented. Amusing expression like.. An arc in the blue Magical shades well blended An arch to Heaven. Thanks.
After seeing the colorful arch I ran for my torch, I wanted to know where is the arrow! Is it travelling to infinity? No, it's least interested in divinity, I found it in my heart, reflected to her eyes through my art with a bouquet of red roses to gain love after so many losses.
Ha... Ha....why look for Cupid's arrow with a torch? You always carry it in your heart....! Enjoyed your instant and rhyming response to my poem.... My computer has gone so slow.... now it is a pain to respond to the comments! Thanks a lot, Akhtar ji
It is long since I have seen a rainbow...! I feel it is also facing extinction! The other day to my joy when I saw a rainbow, I felt it was a door opening to Heaven! Thank you sir!
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7/30/2025 6:36:11 AM # 1.0.0
Indeed a rainbow is an arch to heaven; You can see it but you can't touch it. Thanks Valsa.