Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Haiku (Rain) Comments

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Rajnish Manga
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Varsha M 03 November 2020

True sir. Drowned in it all blues only leaving back pain.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 17 November 2018

Feeling blessed when rain comes but worried when it does not stop falling.A brilliant write.10+++++++

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2018

That is exactly what was the idea behind this poem. Thanks a lot.

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Michael Walker 02 August 2018

I like the sound of rain falling on the rooftop, especially at night. A brilliant haiku.

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Rajnish Manga 02 August 2018

You remind me of so many folk songs in which the sound of rain falling on ground or a tin roof is used quite nicely. Thanks a lot.

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Walterrean Salley 15 February 2018

Enjoyed your haiku on rain. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 15 February 2018

I am honored to have received your appreciative comments, Dear Poet Friend.

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2017

But the pain fades away.... so the water meet the root and the strength for tomorrow begin!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2016

We need the rain. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2016

Thanks for your kind words, Edward. We really need rains to recharge our underground water reserves and catchment areas.

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Michael Walker 05 October 2016

This makes me think again about rain. Very good. Michael Walker.

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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2016

So nice of you to have appreciated the poem, Thank you, Michael.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 September 2016

In Hindi folk songs a woman whose beloved is away always gets pains from the rains.

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Rajnish Manga 09 September 2016

Thanks for finding its connect with folk songs and let me add another aspect of semi-classical form of music known as 'Kajri' which also reflects the sadness of the beloved whose lover is away when the rain brings showers. Thank you very much, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2016

There is always pain in life and rain sometimes give joy and heavy rain also give pain. But rain supplies water and we get bliss getting this. Interesting this haiku is...10

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2016

You have so nicely put across the gist of this poem. Thank you, Kumarmani ji.

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