Monday, September 21, 2015

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Raymond Farrell
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mr.6969 04 March 2019

you have an extra syllable

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 September 2015

It is an universal phenomenon. Congrats for pinpointing it.

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Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

Absolutely right! ! (oops,1st line has 6 syllables)

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Raymond Farrell 22 September 2015

Changed exists to persists so is now 7 syllables. Thanks for pointing it out Kelly.

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Raymond Farrell

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Perth, Ontario
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