Monday, October 1, 2012

Haiku (R.I.P) Comments

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Heaven calls to her
hell grabs him hung a neck noose
sorrows bloom teary
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Nader Baheri 05 October 2012

brilliant and facinating. we and the others who are the victim of such crimes, would praise this great piece of work. mucha gracias for sharing

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Ramesh Rai 05 October 2012

RIP. who ever be but it is a great dedication to other to who are the victim of such occurrence.

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Kelvin Owusu 01 October 2012

i wrote this haiku due to a rape and murder which occurred over a week ago, it was a dedication to other cases such as this.

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Stevie Taite 01 October 2012

One is heaven bound, the other is a butterfly in the rain! Both will cause tears to fall? A lot said in your Haiku. Interesting!

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Kelvin Owusu

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