Haiku: Puddles Comments

fun wasn't it--to run like a child through puddles! ! ! !

oh and a fav

a lake of stars for this gem

I love the effectiveness of a well-born haiku, it can add such depth and beauty to our lives---thank you, for sharing your talent with us! puts a sparkle in our skies!

I can imagine the scene...full of puddles...Thanks for sharing

Loved it. David, the child in you has come out in this marvel of a poem. Who said, "Child is the father of Man? "

Probably it's the major portion of the precipitation...... here is the cloudy sky... a beautiful one......

Puddles is right! No matter where you look today, these mostly man-made puddles inspire very great freight! A very far reaching, haiku.

I remember running in puddles having so much fun. Now, I have to avoid them, so I don't slip and fall.

A world of puddles....what a beautiful expression. Poignant too. A succinct gem that I am glad I didn't miss.

A run for the meals by the refugees.

I like to see how big of puddles I can jump as I run!

Fed up of the rain here David x

It is here also Bravo! ! !