Thursday, July 16, 2015

Haiku. Poet (5-7-5) Comments

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Valsa George
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Magadha Rani 06 March 2020

An excellent haiku dear madam! Thanks for sharing! (Poetess Magadha)

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2018

that sometimes happens to me, but with ice cream, and...........you don't want to know what spills forth! ! thanks for a shorty this time. bri :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

It's a great Haiku! The brevity and precision of expression is praiseworthy and commendable! ............10

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Nosheen Irfan 09 August 2016

Magical. So beautifully put. The world must hear the melody of a poet's heart. Succinct poetic gem.10plus

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Profound....................................!

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Wes Vogler 20 January 2016

Great, Valsa (maybe should be a senryu?) Rules are not really that tight.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 July 2015

Let music commit this naught again and again. Beautiful!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 July 2015

Inspiration fills her Unable to hold it inside She puts in words. Beautiful haiku on music.

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Beautiful one. Exemplary haiku.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2015

Heart touching.Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

Lovely! Thanks, Valsa

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