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that sometimes happens to me, but with ice cream, and...........you don't want to know what spills forth! ! thanks for a shorty this time. bri :)
It's a great Haiku! The brevity and precision of expression is praiseworthy and commendable! ............10
Magical. So beautifully put. The world must hear the melody of a poet's heart. Succinct poetic gem.10plus
Profound....................................!
Great, Valsa (maybe should be a senryu?) Rules are not really that tight.
Inspiration fills her Unable to hold it inside She puts in words. Beautiful haiku on music.
An excellent haiku dear madam! Thanks for sharing! (Poetess Magadha)