Wednesday, May 3, 2017

Haiku Poems Comments

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For the dead leader


The silence paid by the tribute
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Saravanan Sivasubramanian
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Dear sir, Thanks for your suggestions. I will not misunderstand. I always welcome your suggestions

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Rajendran Muthiah 12 June 2017

Silence of the birds, was the real glowing tribute, to the dead leader. (5- 7- 5) syllable structure. In this way the following lines can also be reshaped. I availed so much freedom to give suggestions to you because I feel that you will not misunderstand my concern for you. Please make tireless efforts.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 May 2017

Very nice indeed. Thanks

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