The plane is touching the cloud
What a great surprise
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I can see two horizons in this poem. The plane and the ocean. Is that because you have to choose between two options?
Nice thought provoking poem with good usage of imagery. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing.
What a great surprise- - - - there is a sense of wonder- - - - - Thank you for your haiku.
the falling of the sky into the sea is dramatised in such short verses. thank you dear poet. tony
An excellent haiku! என்னே சிந்தனை! வியந்தனம் யாம்.