(haiku) Parenthood, On The Town Comments

Clever title which really adds to the poem. Very nicely done. Although I must say, (and please don't think it rude of me) I've been reading some haiku lately on the site and through reading enough comments I've deduced that your poem is in fact a senryu. Apparently haiku deals with nature while senryu deals with thing more related to people. The syllable count for both is, as you've presented 5-7-5 That said, a beautiful poem it is. No matter what people call it