Haiku (Opaque) Comments

lovely write, , , , , , , , , , ...

Commendable.Inspirational.A good application.

what not kill u make u strong/bravo Farah

wow fantastically wrote this its a truth

very true! it's something great to write a meaningful haiku!

wonderful haiku. greatly written

a nice haiku keep on writing

A wonderful haiku. Well penned, thanks.

this is really great 1 farha.... nice!

Wonderful haiku you have penned.Deserve more than 10

Oh, I tot it said blacktop.

bravo ma'am....love the way how you play with your words

A nice Haiku, Farah which captures the heart!

lovely play of memories and realm of backdrop, it's nicely penned.

Race you to the lemonade!

Too short what a petty I enjoy it I want more: p

ream of back drop... nice one.....i am with unwritten soul while assessing the poem... love ly.. keep going..10

Nice Haiku Farah...definitely_Soul