Haiku On Haiku (5-7-5) Comments

I am delighted to read this amazing haiku on haiku dear madam! Thanks for sharing............................10

Or stroke on keyboard A whim striking in the mind Not hard to erase. Look at the tweets and words of wisdom on social media. The fact of life then and now. I liked your Haiku.

Here I think heart is th white paper and mind is the pen in which the stain on heart can't be erased. A beautiful haiku has been shared by you astutely. Thanks for sharing.

This reminded me of Kabir bani. So much wisdom in few words.

True saying my friend. It is a fact of life that it is easier to stain than to clean!

Absolutely... it's difficult to erase the mark left by a pen. what is done cannot be undone. wonderful work.

A nice haiku on haiku......................................

Good thoughts of ink on paper. Can never be erased from our minds. Sweet write.

The marks of ink remaining for generations to come. Beautifully said. Thank you.

Lovely write expressing the desire to write and to be heard is a passion that can't be erased!

Good. Here is my embellishment in a haiku: Smudges are often Beautiful when they describe Thoughts hidden in pens

A Permanent Marker of the Silent Word...Matsu Basho would have reveled in your concept, Valsa, I'm certain! ~FjR~