Wednesday, May 31, 2023

Haiku - On Death Comments

Rating: 4.5

golden leaves falling,
crashing waves in rhythm call,
sunset swallows all.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

When the lights are taken away we see the darkness, it is nothing but the absence of light, since our eyes are not meant to see thru the darkness we rest for a while. Full Stars

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Anjandev Roy 01 June 2023

Marvelous work.....thank u, dear friend....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 June 2023

Very sublime Asim Bravo! ! !

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S H 01 June 2023

Perfect poem, Full Stars with all appreciation.

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Rajan T Renganathan 01 June 2023

Koi Samjah nahi koi jana nahi...Zindagi ka safar hai ye kaisa safar.

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Rajan T Renganathan 01 June 2023

Sunset brings down the curtain on light and the darkness surrounds that is what the life and death is all about from light to darkness which nobody can comprehend.

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Rajan T Renganathan 01 June 2023

This one will go to my Fav. Short and so meaningful poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 01 June 2023

Night is dark and it swallows everything. Awesome 👌

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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