Friday, May 5, 2006

Haiku: Old Nun Comments

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The bent old sister,
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Sonny Rainshine
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Very, very vivid. It contrasts the cloistered life with children at play outside in a very moving way. I also love the contrast between the old woman and the young children. The whole Haiku sets up multiple contrasts. Loved the read, L&T

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John Tiong Chunghoo 05 May 2006

love yours, old nun examines her head and wonders her life has been as empty

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