** Haiku Of Love ** (Free Style) Comments

the imagery in this poem beautiful, thank you for writing it.

beautifully described... Ranjit

Wonderful expressions conveyed with a perfect economy of words. Voted 10.

Anjali this is a very nice and cute piece.

A tide of love/swells in the /entwined hearts............beautiful lines. this is called magic of words..congratulation Anju for this sweet lines

anju, so poetic and loveful your heart.....10

well this is great indeed! ! but sort of make me feel bad too, cause i know being in love will make my life's woes go away..... but still this is sort of bittersweet one for the people who have bitter xp about love, but sort of make us itch for that feeling of love again! ! this is beautiful as always Anjali! ! with lots of love shan

beautifully written lines.....

heart's key! ! beautiful! ...... they will search it, sure! 10..

the last lines are really great and dramatic great poet help me too

A true love Haiku written with passion wonderful xxx regards ++++++10

The twin drakes of passion sail in a lake of love- lightning flashes to take a picture wow what a sweet and done in an innovative way of heart felt idea...really a master piece type..hope you continue writing haikos along with short poems..you have enough comman over doing poems..means you are a real poetess.. other haikos are also good...better to put seperately... one haiko as a one piece of work.. love it..inspiring one..10++++++++++

The twin drakes of passion sail in a lake of love- lightning flashes to take a picture. STUNNING, THANKS FOR SHARING

I like the idea that 'Lightning flashes takes a picture'. It is a truly nice emoscape you have evoked in your writing.

it is a beautiful write indeed, no matter what how many haiku's been written on this most favorable subject but in the end answer ends with only one word... i.e. LOVE and that word is the only reason of our and everyone's existence....thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts wit us and thanks for your kind comment on my poem, anju....10+++++++ rgds asif

I fell for The first one...Imagination transforms into poetry!

Small and beautiful.Eyes do have the keys to the heart.well written

anju its beautiful really liked it ur free style is also some style.. ;) cheers

another read for this beautiful poem..

very very beautific.....it's soulful and perfectly descriptive of how love drowns out all other sensations...