Monday, May 5, 2014

Haiku Of Hockey Comments

Rating: 4.2

She had lovely fast running legs,
And mighty arms reaching bottom of the kegs,
Adventurous lips, winning wine filled in pegs,
Romantic and exciting to watch her moving,
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Khalid Saifullah 18 February 2015

A good haiku of classical hockey.................10

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Bri Edwards 19 May 2014

i think i lack some knowledge of hockey [field hocky, not ice hockey? , or is it a sport i am not familiar at all with OR with which i am not at all familiar], haiku, and keats AND you, to be able to understand and fully appreciate this poem. i DO enjoy some rhyming here. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Sarmad Mirza 09 May 2014

The 5,3,2,1 Asian style formation of Hockey in the poem. Liked it.

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