She had lovely fast running legs,
And mighty arms reaching bottom of the kegs,
Adventurous lips, winning wine filled in pegs,
Romantic and exciting to watch her moving,
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i think i lack some knowledge of hockey [field hocky, not ice hockey? , or is it a sport i am not familiar at all with OR with which i am not at all familiar], haiku, and keats AND you, to be able to understand and fully appreciate this poem. i DO enjoy some rhyming here. thanks for sharing. :) bri
The 5,3,2,1 Asian style formation of Hockey in the poem. Liked it.
A good haiku of classical hockey.................10