Saturday, May 25, 2013

Haiku- Obsessions Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am happiest
When I'm not stuck in my head
but when I'm present
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

A wonderful haiku with valuable advice!

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Farah Ilyas 25 May 2013

Realistic haiku......to accept the reality is really a great gifted quality.

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Dave Walker 25 May 2013

Like it, some people end up spending most of their life in a dream world. They forget there's a real world out there. A great poem.

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