Haiku O' Brian 17 Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Haiku O' Brian 17

Rating: 5.0


fog mountains hover
the sea an empty desert
dripping sails emerge

Tuesday, December 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fog,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 14 December 2016

Now that is painting a picture! ! ! A living breathing picture! ! fog mountains hover- -I can see it! ! ! and my favorite- - - dripping sails emerge- - -that is bringing a poem alive! ! ! ! ! You have quite a skill set coupled with an extraordinary closeness to nature. 10 stars are not enough!

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