Haiku No.2 - Lies Poem by Jim McGill

Haiku No.2 - Lies

Rating: 5.0


Haiku No.2


Lies

Some love to live lies
Others…let lies live—to love

Sad…to live love lies


Jim McGill, June 30,2023

Sunday, July 2, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Haiku,Lies,Live,Love,Sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I tried to write Haiku, but I don't know that much about it. So it might be a Haiku; could even be a lie. So, like some Presidents, I started with a lie and came up with this.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 12 July 2023

Haiku or not--this is a serious piece of writing, deserving of a good thoughful mulling! top marks from me

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Jim McGill 14 August 2023

July 12? ? ? ? I just got to see this comment today. I don't know why it did not come up on my page before this. If it did, for some reason I didn't see it. Anyway, thank you Susan. I appreciate your comments.

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