Torrential downpour
cleansing the world with its might
nature's cleansing power
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Torrential rain and the resultant floods are the nature's cleansing ways. What else can be so effective?
Torrential downpour, deadly hurricane and pinching. heat of sun are all cleansing the earth Dr Nehal.
Clean the world with rain - most healing and inspring.......10
I gave 5 stars, AND I saved a lot of my VERY VALUABLE TIME by picking a SHORT poem to try to tear apart. I MEANT to comment on aka 'on which to leave comments'. ;)
Your Poet's Notes are a bit unclear (for me) in their/its message, but the Haiku is very clear in its meaning (for me) . And I believe it matches well what I once read descibing a Haiku: No complete sentences, a nature-related topic, and 3 lines, no more nor less. And maybe NO rhyming. : )
Nature teaches us hygiene by example.. nice poem