Sunday, July 9, 2023

Haiku ~ Nature's Hygiene Comments

Rating: 5.0

Torrential downpour
cleansing the world with its might
nature's cleansing power
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nature teaches us hygiene by example.. nice poem

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Rajan T Renganathan 10 July 2023

Great imagery in your haiku.

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Poetic Sky 10 July 2023

Nature is awesome in all it's forms.

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Sheeya Hacks 10 July 2023

Fabulous Haiku, least to say.

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Torrential rain and the resultant floods are the nature's cleansing ways. What else can be so effective?

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Torrential downpour, deadly hurricane and pinching. heat of sun are all cleansing the earth Dr Nehal.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 July 2023

beautiful haiku tfs Asim

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Clean the world with rain - most healing and inspring.......10

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

I gave 5 stars, AND I saved a lot of my VERY VALUABLE TIME by picking a SHORT poem to try to tear apart. I MEANT to comment on aka 'on which to leave comments'. ;)

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

Your Poet's Notes are a bit unclear (for me) in their/its message, but the Haiku is very clear in its meaning (for me) . And I believe it matches well what I once read descibing a Haiku: No complete sentences, a nature-related topic, and 3 lines, no more nor less. And maybe NO rhyming. : )

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