Saturday, October 3, 2020

Haiku- Nature's Song Comments

Rating: 5.0


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M. Asim Nehal
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Unwritten Soul 04 October 2020

Orchaestral from the nature Playing for peaceful pleasure

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2020

Along with rain you have heard the nature's beautiful song. Birds are chirping and thunder is roaring with sparking of light. We imagine the scene. An interesting poem is well penned...5 stars..

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 October 2020

Dancing nightingale Thru the autumnal drizzling Invites the winter

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Mamta S 04 October 2020

Everybody is amazed by the nature different Shades and this is the one which you have very well explain in your short poem

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Ricky Manhatten 03 October 2020

Yes, music all around.10**

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Michael Jack 03 October 2020

Orchestra played by the nature.5*

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2020

music all around.......brilliant....dear friend....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 03 October 2020

contd.....Shakespear sonnet is 3 quatrain followed by closing couplet with rhyming. There are many more. I'm trying to master these both style. In 8-7 it becomes difficult to close the theme. So volta has to be placed very wisely I feel. Thanks for guiding.

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Varsha M 03 October 2020

Melodious nature's song.

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M. Asim Nehal

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