Saturday, May 13, 2023

Haiku: - My Offer. Comments

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heart demands something
I offer my pen to thee
now read me whole night
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Sheeya Hacks
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Anjandev Roy 25 June 2023

Justly excellent......thanks for sharing....

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Sandra Feldman 18 June 2023

Nice offer. Truthful and simple. Worth a try. Sincerity, certainly is the best priority.

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

What do I comment after reading your haiku and comments by honored members, I am speechless.

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Heart has its own volition

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 May 2023

this is such a brilliant poem that Shakespeare would be proud

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S H 13 May 2023

Is it a punishment for heart? I liked your way to express self.

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