Saturday, October 8, 2022

Haiku: My Life Comments

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Level of rice reached
The bottom of container.
How long I can go?
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Pallab Chaudhury
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 October 2022

wonderous piece Pallab

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Pallab Chaudhury 09 October 2022

Thank you for the comments being made on the poem... With best wishes./pc

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Resources are always scarce. It is our bounden duty to make it plenty..

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Pallab Chaudhury 09 October 2022

By use of rice it was tried to depict the vital force required for human life. Thank you for the comments. With best wishes/PC.

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