Moon waxes an' wanes
Mad after the earth revolves
Yet sun flooding love!
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beautiful Kesav. I love how so much is said with so few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)
this is fantastic..the chemitry of the relationship between the three..lovely 10
I agree with the other comments. This is perfect haiku. Love it! Karin Anderson
Good Haiku, I also like Haiku's as they are full of expression in a short form,10 Lynda x
i really like Haiku's...just coz there is such a beautiful n dignified way to say n express so much in such few words.... this one is very good.... the moon, the earth, the sun... great..
We are the objects administered by sun moon earth, bearing the heat, tides and the quake and also the flood of love…. short and meaningful
Nothing more glorious than that mysterious moon!