Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Haiku- Moon Comments

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Moon waxes an' wanes
Mad after the earth revolves
Yet sun flooding love!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Nothing more glorious than that mysterious moon!

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Duh Huh 02 August 2009

beautiful Kesav. I love how so much is said with so few words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Sweet

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this is fantastic..the chemitry of the relationship between the three..lovely 10

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I agree with the other comments. This is perfect haiku. Love it! Karin Anderson

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Subbaraman N V 13 June 2008

A perfect Haiku! Pl. read mine on Nature and Moon in the PH.

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Perfect count again, for the haiku, construct and the imagery!

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Mamta Agarwal 03 May 2008

sun flooding love. a beatiful line.

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Lynda Robson 24 April 2008

Good Haiku, I also like Haiku's as they are full of expression in a short form,10 Lynda x

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Deepti Agarwal 23 April 2008

i really like Haiku's...just coz there is such a beautiful n dignified way to say n express so much in such few words.... this one is very good.... the moon, the earth, the sun... great..

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Abha Sharma 22 April 2008

We are the objects administered by sun moon earth, bearing the heat, tides and the quake and also the flood of love…. short and meaningful

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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