Haiku. Mist (5-7-5) Comments

smoke without a fire but deep beneath It is full of fire

nice imagery is created here about the mist

Mist is covered the mountain top. You have beautifully perceived the entire imagery. A lovely haiku is excellently penned is definitely heart touching. A nice sharing is done really.10

You have brilliantly captured the magnificent beauty of a great mountain through this amazing haiku replete with imagery! Thanks for sharing......10

Very well captured, great haiku, Thanks Valsa

This nice haiku (10) reminded me of a old Malayalam movie song which I am attempting below in Haiku form: Hair of mist grayed Smoke of cannabis spread across On the distant mounts

You really have seen this. I have seen this too. But impossible to imagine that this beauty could be written so well. What is behind the mist? Why is the mountain quiet when the mist is smoking it...... very very nice..

I don't see smoke without fire s I am a victim of a fire without smoke.

Exquisite one. Best Haiku. Thanks for sharing.

There is no smoke without fire is no more valid. Beautiful haiku.

And the volcano is inside...............Wonderful, yet another thoughtful haiku.

Exquisitely descriptive And Imaginatively free.