Saturday, June 21, 2008

Haiku- Menu # 1 Comments

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(for breakfast lunch and dinner)

Dawn...
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Love poems and haikus based on the wind. Nicely written!

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 05 November 2009

Excellent and creative, vivacious poems.10

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very well written all three of them....10

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Alex Gomez 03 June 2009

Playful yet amazingly well written and flowing haiku! Good job.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

wonderful piece of haiku on nature...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Excellent composition, very lovely.

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the wind and breeze too are real naughty...lovely..10

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Beautiful spirited work. The dawn with a beautiful tender touch, while breeze and wind blew me along to the yard to laugh out loud! Great imagination in these three treasures. Karin Anderson

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

the last was very amusing.....very creative sir.

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Fiona Davidson 03 January 2009

Absolutly stunning Kesav...the images brought to lif here are wonderful...Thank you....Fi

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

almost perfect...your midnight snack haven't taken yet...soon to serve by me. a 10.

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Caterpillar MC 24 September 2008

Simple and mischievious....a very nice read.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 July 2008

sizzling. One of the best haiku I ever read....so much variety

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Tsira Goge 03 July 2008

Very gentle, (but only it is temporary, yet did not threaten hurricane...) . A good find... 10. Tsira

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Seema Chowdhury 02 July 2008

so sweet and appreciation for the gifts of nature.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 02 July 2008

fantastic, beautiful thanks for sharing 10

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Mamta Agarwal 02 July 2008

Kesav, impressive choice of words. like Flora i too smiled reading them. thanks

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Flora Gillingham 01 July 2008

Your haiku have brought a smile to my face. Thank you, Kesav. Fx

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Thad Wilk 30 June 2008

What a lovely menu to choose from Kesav! This poem is a banquet served eloquently! Best wishes, *10*! ! ! Friend Thad

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a crisp cute poem, stating how romantic a nature can be! WOW! good imagination!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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