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Your poetry is a pleasure to read...! ! ! thank u for sharing Christina, well i write amazing short poems & interesting creatively web site to :) so please check out..

no more disk space grandma deletes all, ...... the poem finally sounds pangs in heart and mind, extraordinarily you have penned it, dear poetess, congratulations, thanks a lot and welcome here to PoemHunter, I hope your mighty pen will publish more famous poems

very nice Haiku. in short you convey a lot....... this i s a special ability. thank u dear Christina

You are short of syllables for a Haiku. Usually it's 3 lines. Line 1 has 5 syllables, Line 2 has 7 syllables and Line 3 has 5 syllables for a total of 17 syllables in the poem. You have the following: no more disk space grandma deletes all As you can see it's 4 syllables on the first line and 5 syllables on the second line. Total 9 syllables. You will have to add a few more words. Hope this helps. : -)