Haiku - Meeting Poem by david e golledge

Haiku - Meeting



The meeting held,
Seconds pass. Minutes taken
never to return.

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Sonny Rainshine 24 April 2008

Love the play on meanings here. Seconds, as in seconding a motion at a meeting and taking minutes with the double meaning of recording the proceedings and the passing of time. A lot accomplished in an economy of words. And perfect adherence to the form too!

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