Haiku: Lullaby Comments

Muse! ! Music. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A wonderful three liner poem. Great imagery. We can hear the rythym of the rain.

" Traditional Haiku Structure There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The 1st & 3rd lines have 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Punctuation and capitalization need not follow the rigid rules used in structuring sentences" i think you have 22 syllables. [in the U.S. aluminium is aluminum (one syllable less!) ] I say this is not haiku, but it's an ok poem. which ear hears " music" ? just one? ? bri ;)

" Traditional Haiku Structure There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The 1st & 3rd lines have 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Punctuation and capitalization need not follow the rigid rules used in structuring sentences" i think you have 22 syllables. [in the U.S. aluminium is aluminum (one syllable less!) ] I say this is not haiku, but it's an ok poem. which ear hears " music" ? just one? ? bri ;)

A wonderful write...10+++++

It does make a terrific melody. A fantastic haiku, A B.

I can hear the music! Excellent!

The rain drops falling nd the lullaby. very nice comparison dear poet. tony

Music to ear, great write