Saturday, October 12, 2019

Haiku: Lovers: At Home Comments

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Re-fixed the button
Of shirt; You find convenient
Embracing warmly!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Aniruddha Pathak 12 October 2019

Buttons come in the way, leave a large hole, Zip fasteners too fail to score a goal, Lovers should only wrap around a bed sheet, And embrace, each to each greet. The Haiku says it all without saying naught.

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 October 2019

... inspired by your kind words. Thank you and regards. PC

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2019

A wonderful write entitled, ' Lovers: At Home'.....Thanks for sharing........................................................10

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 October 2019

Waw, nice to have a comment from you my dear! ...encouraged me by your words. Thank you so much. With best wishes for the Bijaya PC

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2019

A lovely haiku......10++++

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 October 2019

Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement... With best wishes and regds PC

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