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What a prayer, short and sweet keeper of my heart love me as long as i live show me the bright light
What a request, lover will be pleased now, I wish I could have done that.
WOW to the God as well as to the beloved and both in one Haiku, Brilliant.
Love is just like bright light. This has certain spark to motivate life with wisdom and joy. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.
Beautiful poem dedicated to love and the 'keeper of my heart'. It carries a sublime message. Thanks, Asim ji. Happy New Year.
Thank u so much Rajnish ji, Wishing u and your entire family a very happy, prosperous, exciting, jubilant, healthy NEW YEAR 2019.
Lovely poem. Too short.