Friday, October 28, 2016

Haiku- Life's Journey Comments

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1. Feeling trapped in time,
looking to escape the situation.
A frog leaps to freedom.
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Renu Kakkar
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Michael Spangenthal 28 October 2016

Even when the trial is hopeless, and the verdict's unavoidable, fresh life will go on, beautiful haiku.

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Renu Kakkar 28 October 2016

Thanks for the encouragement. I will be posting my poems regularly.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 October 2016

darkness engulfs my thoughts, but thoughts are far above darkness.

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Renu Kakkar 28 October 2016

You could be right. I wish to say thoughts one may have positive thought but sometimes these become negative due to circumstance.

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Renu Kakkar

Fazilka, punjab
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