Monday, November 2, 2020

Haiku - Life's Footprints Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 08 November 2020

Winter full of memories.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2020

Damages of the past resulting in a great loss, humanity standing still on the road of life, and cyclone of hate has erased the footprints of love. A meaningful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2020

Winter is co-related with frostbite. A meaningful Haiku on a philosophical ground is well executed relating to season. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 November 2020

winter invites the frosts come to expunge stain of heart!

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 November 2020

Sigh! Irony of life. Though reality erases the footprints but the heart sustains the anguish.10****

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2020

a winter river frostbite of old memories no footprints to trace- - So beautiful!

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Anjandev Roy 03 November 2020

Another remarkable haiku.........thank u, dear poet........anjandev roy.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 02 November 2020

A winter river frostbite of old memories no footprints to trace wonderful

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Michael Jack 02 November 2020

Niche poem. Handsomely thought.

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Shreya Hacks 02 November 2020

Sheer brilliance. You have written whole story in three lines. Wonderful poem.

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Varsha M 02 November 2020

Life's footprint indeed very true. Beautiful.

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Deepak S S 02 November 2020

Brilliantly written. Hats off MAN 5****

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Rajnish Manga 02 November 2020

What an imagery and an apt analogy between icy cold season and painful memories subjected to freeze before it could bite. Skillfully crafted. Thanks a lot. .

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M. Asim Nehal

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