Friday, November 21, 2014

Haiku# Life-6 Comments

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Haiku# Life-6
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How sad, flowers at morn
Sparkling with tears falling to
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Valsa George 23 November 2014

All that is born should fall down and rot oneday! Unfortunately flowers wither too fast! Another great haiku!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 November 2014

lovely write, from a dewy flower to fallen petals.

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Kewayne Wadley 21 November 2014

Short, simple, sweet! Lovely write

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