Haiku- Life Comments

Lovely poem

Simple and very sweet! Nice!

Simply jocund…and appropriate Ms. Nivedita UK

Deep and meaningful. Thanks for sharing.10.

A brother-poem of my 'goal'...perhaps elder brother 'cause written earlier in '08...aimless life is no life at all....nice read...thank you

Optimism and ambition - guiding stars to life. Nice little poem. Vanita.

indeed the truth... gud 1..

''''Life lush and green lawn For each and all to walk on Sky high to aim on…'''''' life moves in many ways with many trials and testimonies priests come, immam with koran they bless the green lawns known as graves........naizz

the sky is the limit..told absolutely well

That's what life is...speechless as i am with your perfect haiku composition. Take care and God bless! ! ! your friend always,

Hi-I think i will walk on your lawn something to aim for -exellent work regards uavaniceday

Beautiful haiku on life and nature!

Perfect haiku and a good theme!

profound..........thanks for sharing

To set the equilibrium of breath and death Need the Sky high aim and lush green bed…. So well worded is your text….