Thursday, February 16, 2012

Haiku La La Comments

Rating: 4.3

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We desire
Daily a new sunny morn
Sun lights this darken world-forlorn
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Susan Williams 23 September 2020

Sun lights this darken world-forlorn- - - - - - - - - - - - like the way you put this, the adjective after the noun increased its effect

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Unwritten Soul 16 February 2012

each one create la and reach the last one i can sing la la la la...a nice compilation, that why i can sing lalalala hahahha...different flavors in one dishes..that's nice! _Unwritten Soul

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