Tuesday, November 16, 2021

Haiku: Illusions Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sun in the desert
Creates hazy mirages
Not to be trusted.
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David Wood
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Pallab Chaudhury 19 November 2021

On the arid field / Of memory, Oh! Dear! Come/ As a rivulet! / PC

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Kim Barney 17 November 2021

I love this haiku about the desert. Have given it five stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 November 2021

There is always mystery in the desert. A thought provoking poem well crafted and depicted. Great brevity.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 November 2021

Great imagery in your crafty haiku.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2021

It's another excellent haiku! Your short works are as beautiful as long ones!

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