Haiku Ii-The Queen Of The Lake Comments

wow, I also trying to write haiku, but I don't have, this good poems

Alex - You have a gift for expressing so much in so few words. I hope to read many more of these beautiful haiku in the future! Best to you - Cheryl

This is a good haiku. Keep writing the best. This is yet another wonderful poem. I need a medal for having the most best poems over here! Lol! God Bless All Poets. *Lilly*

this is a good haiku my only concern is the emphasis of iron in the title. Though 'Iron Hard' is mentioned in the poem, i dont feel like iron is significant to the poem as a whole. Nothing wrong with the poem, i just suggest a reworking of the tittle

Another beautiful piece. Susie xx.

maybe you could change it to `On icy waters..' to make the count completely consistent in perfect 'ku form thru-out... Alex. well tasted, well laid-out, deserving description.. care, sjg