Saturday, September 6, 2014

Haiku. Her Dreams (5-7-5) Comments

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In her life's morgue lie
Dry cadavers of disfigured dreams
Waiting cremation!
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2018

Beautiful haiku on dream so nicely executed concisely and shared.

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Dinesan Madathil 18 September 2014

Early burial and rituals may resurrect her dreams, one hopes!

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Savita Tyagi 17 September 2014

Let those dreams have peace In cold arms of earth supreme Away from time's reach. Your haiku inspires.

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Savita Tyagi 17 September 2014

Let those dreams have peace In cold arms of earth supreme Away from time's reach. Your haiku inspires.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 08 September 2014

Hello poet Valsa Awesome Haiku, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Amitava Sur 07 September 2014

A very truthful confession is written here, like or not most of our unending wishes or dreams remaining unfulfilled in our life are left as cadavers only, , , , very true

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 September 2014

Profound truth dissected to its elements. Beautiful haiku.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2014

A Wonderful Haiku. Truth, said in a few words.... Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 September 2014

Oh! what a haiku....Valsa......In a few words a lot has been said......In fact you are always an inspiration.......

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Daniel Brick 06 September 2014

Wow! I hope this woman gets a chance at reincarnation. She needs another lifespan at least to improve the quality of her life. It's curious westerners think reincarnation is hunky-dory because you get a second chance instead of facing eternal judgment after one and only one lifetime, but easteners see it as a burden of karma, willingly cast off..

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2014

Dreams are dreams, if they are fulfilled place them in your hairs with help of a clip of love, if not fulfilled keep them like dry rose petals in the book of your heart.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 September 2014

Beautiful, excellent imagination only gone out of scale; the mid one

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 September 2014

a work of excellent imagery.

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