Haiku -Hanging Dewdrops Comments

Life is hanging like dewdrops nobody knows when it will fall.

Brilliantly written. You are a true artists.

Fantastic poem short and sweet.10+

DJ enjoyed your thoughts. Philosophical is it so?

Very interesting poem. Closer to life.

When wind blows dew drops fall down from leaves. Ushering of these is happening now. Dew drops will swung still wind blows. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned...10

Awesome poem. Short and sweet. Nice philosophy.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन रचना की सोच, . 10+

Hanging dewdrops signifies soul in our body and the life is playing tricks by way of wind blows and holes/ ushering in leaves signifies the deteriorating life with the passage of time. BRILLIANT one ASIM JI. SIMPLY SUPERB...100++

In the lips of leaves Glimpsing dew with rising ray Time plays flute of time.....

To hang on that little faith means a lot. I love your style of writing. Thode se lafzon main sab kuch keh diya.10++ for these philosophical words.

Very realistic....lovely 10