Haiku - Half Moon Comments

Amazing 5-7-5 Haiku Half Moon! Fantastically worded. Thank you so much for sharing, Asim Sir!

I see this haiku encompassing the water, the earth and the sky! In water, the water lilies, above the Earth the clouds, and in the sky the half moon! A three liner on a panoramic view! Great write, my friend!

Muse of the moon! ! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Your poems on moon is fantastic everytime

Good Haiku. Lillies and white clouds swallowing half moon.

great imagery and fantastic haiku.

Lilies on the pond Twinkling stars in moonlight Greetings the love night

Dancing white lilies.... What a unique imagery. Loved reading this poem. Thanks, Asim ji.

बहुत खूबसूरत विवरण... साथ मे तेरे हाथ मे मेरा हाथ, और बादलो का मधुर गाना, जो लगे हम दोनों को सुहाना।।। Rated 10++