Saturday, February 2, 2019

Haiku, Haiku - Life Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 19 February 2019

A wonderful haiku. Wisely written.

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S H 18 February 2019

And so is the life, always in search of something.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 February 2019

Fantastic Haiku. Asim ji, i love the imagery that you have created with such few words. I can vsualise the whole scenario. How you run for shelter under a tree when lashed by a chilling rain. For this classic Haiku - full score of 10

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Thank u so much Geeta Ji, Your comments always motivate me to write more.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 02 February 2019

Cold autumn rain-a beautiful haiku

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Thank u so much Akhan ji.,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 February 2019

Cold autumn rain is captured by trees. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. A picture of Autumn is painted through colours of words.10

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Thank u so much Kumarmaniji. .

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2019

Unexpexted! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Thank u so much my friend EKL.,

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Rajnish Manga 02 February 2019

Awesome and outstanding. This small poem re-creates the scene of a sudden rain and the search for a place of safety. Thanks, Asim ji.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Thank u so much Rajnish ji, .

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