The comparison
of gifts by the parents of
adored receivers;
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i thought i liked this, but then i reread the last two lines and was 'stumped'! i still would like it, but only if those lines read: of receipts by the parents, the doting givers. otherwise i don't get it. hmm? please explain. bri ;)
i thought i liked this, but then i reread the last two lines and was 'stumped'! i still would like it, but only if those lines read: of receipts by the parents, the doting givers. otherwise i don't get it. hmm? please explain. bri ;)
A brilliant haiku.....liked it. Top score.